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Another image in my "... of trolls" series (check out my gallery for several other examples). The trolls of Swedish folklore could really look very different - from big and lumbering to almost human-like and beautiful in a troll-way. This is my take on the old mythos.

This is a mother's day card (Mother's day takes place the last Sunday in May in Sweden) to my mother who really likes this troll-girl character.

MyPaint + GIMP. Any feedback is of course appreciated, especially if there is somethign I can fix before handing it over. :)
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Glamoure Femele Troll xD

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Nice! :thumbsup:

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:iconalexiadeath:
Really nice! if there is something to fix then its the foot on the ground. It looks a little wider and flatter than it should be.

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Thanks, that's a good point! Those claws were surprisingly tricky to get right. I have narrowed the foot a bit (as well as done a few other changes and tweaks all over). Thanks for the comment - and the fave!
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Ok so here you have a super fast reply.

Colors: good contrast between greens and reds working as oposites. works for me. i lve this tone of pink of the left. backgroun is simple but efective.
Composition: a bit flat but ok the weight is balanced.
Lighting: too strong with some weirds effects in the arm for example near the shoulder. Trolls Skin is not metallic i think to have all these specular brights. :D
Theme: Surpresive. beautiful troll and a very manga pose

Details to fix:the right hand (nails) are melting with background. Too much heavy hair imho. like tina turner omg!. i have a headache. and finally the cloth on the bottom part it seems more a bell than a dress.

Hope you helped a bit.

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:icongriatch-art:
Most of these suggestions I implemented now (I commented more on GimpTalk). Thanks again for the help!
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:iconalexiadeath:
The fix to the foot is perfect :)

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Thanks. :) And thanks for the fave!
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